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OC: Princess Hypnotica the Longxizhushuwanshie

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Would you like to breed an OC or Canon character with Hypnotica? You can do so at the Silver Stables: silverromance.deviantart.com/a… (Currently Closed)

Edit; Well guess it's time to reiterate this again, welcome new trolls from whichever depths you've risen from. Leme answer your FAQ's before you comment, in an attempt to educate you. owo No she is not a joke, she will never be a joke and none of my OCs will ever be jokes. Yes I am aware she's bright and her colors don't match, pat yourself on the back for having eyeballs. I know she doesn't follow canon, she never was intended to, none of my OCs are intended to, if everyone followed canon to a T the fandom would be an exceptionally boring place. I know she's apparently 'unoriginal' as I've been told many times, but once again she was never intended to be original, especially in this fandom where there are so many OCs, nothing is original. I just make and buy things the way I like, I don't care if you don't think it's original or not. No I don't plan on changing her unless I decide to myself, I will not be forced, she is not your OC, she is mine. Using the term 'Mary Sue' is known to automatically discredit any 'critique' seeing as it is often used incorrectly, I'd recommend refraining from using it up-and-coming critics. <3 I bought her for a reason, I like her, I wanted to see if I could draw and love a character like this, and I do. You don't like her, cool, awesome, good for you, that doesn't mean you have to be rude about your opinions. I have a number of friends who aren't fond of her, and they told me in a respectable manor, and you too can do the thing! I recommend reading the comments before you make one, honestly you all sound like broken records at this point, and yet people tell me that I'm the unoriginal one here. ;w;

No, she is not a joke what so ever. If you have or are planning to post this image elsewhere, or plan to write a troll comment, please read this first as I am tried of dealing with such things; silverromance.deviantart.com/j…

I absolutely had to draw this baby and so picked it for one of my two personal, non-random spots when picking which of my foals to draw as an adult! Before anyone asks since I know where this will end up, no this is not a joke. One of her mothers was a Joke OC, but she is not. None of my OCs will ever be 'jokes', because no matter how strange or weird some people may think something might look, within this OCs realm of reality, they exist, to treat them as nothing or cast them aside without a purpose is just silly, I mean why make them in the first place if that's all you wish to do. ALL of my OCs, no matter how strange or different they may be, have a place in my heart and are 100% legitimate. For some people this is the case for say, their Pokemon in their game, loving them as if they were real, for me it is also my OCs. Something like this can in fact be loved, just as people with strange tastes or a strange fashion sense that some say are different can be loved as well. And if there is anyone who would like to say something along the lines of 'This made me lose faith in the fandom.', as was commented on my cute little Smiley, please proceed to turn off your computer and return to your sheltered life, because there is A LOT worse things in the fandom.

Ahem, anyways. She turned out pretty well in my opinion, whoever said something like this takes five minutes to make was lying, because this took me most of yesterday to line and color! For some reason I love the yellow outlines, they seem to just pop out nicely. Since I couldn't see the back right leg on the foal, I improvised. ^-^ On the other side of her is a Pegasus wing, you can't see it but it's there. X3

Parents: :iconstrawberry-t-pony: Strawberry-T-Pony's Queen Mary Awesomesauce Supreme Ruler Sue Apple Rainbow Pie Shy Sparkle Rare Greatness Sun Moon the Alicorn Hybrid strawberry-t-pony.deviantart.c… and My Dusk Symphony the Longma silverromance.deviantart.com/a…
From Litter: strawberry-t-pony.deviantart.c… (Done by Strawberry-T-Pony.)

Special Somepony: :iconpegasus-suntail: Pegasus-Suntail's Suntail the Pegasus pegasus-suntail.deviantart.com…

Hypnotica was born during a visit to Queen Mary Awesomesauce's kingdom, which Dusk had accompanied Princess Luna on. With the Queen being the mother of all species, Luna knew of all of the different races that resided there, and knew that Dusk would feel at home there. Dusk wasn't aware of this, and feared that she may frighten the inhabitants, but Luna reassured her to come. Upon arriving, Dusk learned that Luna was right, the Queens subjects were of all different types and species, and they were very kind to her, unafraid of her intimidating appearance. When they met with the Queen, Dusk was to perform a special greeting spell that Luna taught her, that all ponies were to do to whenever they greeted the Queen. Kneeling down in greeting, Dusk prepared her horns for the spell, as small sparks flew from them. When she thought that it was ready, she fired it, but instead of doing the desired effect, it hit the Queen, and with a small flash of light the magic that hit her horn expelled itself in a small smokey bubble. The bubble came down to the ground and popped, revealing a small and strange foal. The Queen chuckled, this wouldn't be the first time something happened like this, and she was not mad at all that Dusk wasn't able to perform the spell properly, for she was very kind. As much as Dusk wished to bring the young foal with her back home, the Queen insisted she stay with her, for she would be more accepted here than anywhere else, for there are very few that understand them. And so Dusk gave the young foal a kiss goodbye and promised to visit the kingdom again whenever she could, for she had an amazing time there.

The strange little foal had the blood of many species within her like her mother, she was a Longxizhushuwanshie. This means she was part Longma, Alicorn, Changeling, Crystal, Forest Sprite, and Plushie Pony, an interesting combination of creatures, and with her many markings and traits, like having one Longma wing and one Pegasus wing. For the first while she was unable to open her eyes, as though they were glued shut, when she was a toddler, they finally opened, revealing circles of color within. It was soon learned that these bands had a hypnotic effect, causing anyone to look into them to go into a trance like state as though a pendulum stood before them. Her mother then knew the perfect name for her, Hypnotica.

Hypnotica grew to hate her eyes, it made her hard for her to talk to ponies so she often either closed her eyes or kept her eyes fixed on the ground, which made her seem anti-social but she was merely trying to keep the other party from becoming entranced. She learned of the ponies that lived far away from the kingdom and what they looked like, and wanted to be like them, normal. She learned of the power she had, being part Changeling she was able to change her appearance to a disguised form, however she learned that this wasn't much help, her disguise was a normal earth pony with a pendulum for a Cutie Mark, but she still had all of the strange markings on her hair and body, and her eyes still had the hypnotic effect, so she had no need of using it. Her other talent, which came from her Longma horns, was a strange pulse which made anyone around her fall asleep, something else she thought was useless. But she came to learn that she could actually help her mothers subjects with it thanks to some coaching from her mother, she worked and worked and it and found that the more she used to, the larger the area it would effect. And so every night when everyone was going to bed, she would use it to help make everyone fall asleep easier and have sweet dreams, as there were a number of them who either had trouble sleeping or had nightmares. She felt useful, and started to learn to like herself, she learned the subjects and friends liked her for who she was, and that she should do the same, because that's the way she was born, and she should be proud of it instead of wishing to be something she's not.

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One day Hypnotica met a pony by the name of Suntail, and he has been one of the greatest assets to her with helping her to learn to love herself as she is. Suntail visited Queen Mary's Kingdom one day, he had heard many things about it and was very curious to see it with is own eyes. He flew there with his own two wings and the help of a map, when he arrived he was greeted by one of Royal Guards. He was a strange looking fellow and Suntail found him intriguing. Today was the day this guard was assigned to show around tourists or new inhabitants to the Kingdom and keep an eye on them, to make sure they weren't troublemakers. The first stop on the tour was Queen Mary's castle, something he was very excited to see. The architecture was amazing, the colors astounding, and the ponies he met inside were very interesting looking. His favorite sight to see however, was a dark colored mare who had strange markings and colors, who seemed to be a hybrid of many different animals.

She was leaning on one of the windowsill, looking out at the Kingdom, a hoof holding up her head. At first he thought that she was Queen Mary as he had heard so much about her while in the castle, however the guard corrected him and told him that it was one of the Queen's many children, Princess Hypnotica. Suntail asked if he could meet her, and the Guard pondered for a minute. The royal family was rather open with visitors, and this pegasus seemed nice enough, but Hypnotica wasn't really one for visitors. Suntail watched as the Guard trotted over to Hypnotica and spoke to her. He noticed that she kept her eyes to the ground as she spoke and he wondered why. When the Guard returned he said that she had okayed the meeting and Suntail excitedly trotted over to her. She turned around to look at him, and he was stunned. She was even more interesting from the front than the back, scales lined her front, she had a clawed hoof with checkered markings and a regular hoof that had blue markings similar to a zebra. A spotted Unicorn horn came out from the middle of her head while little bug like antennae came out from the top of it, and by her ears sprouted two dragonic horns. She kept her head down so he was unable to see her eyes.

Hypnotica noticed his stunned silence, and under her breath mumbled "Great, and here I thought the Guard had screened you properly."

Suntail blushed, finding it hard to find the right words. "N-n-no Princess, you have me all wrong. You see I've never seen such an interesting pony as yourself, I don't mean to stare but I really like the way you look... I'm sure that sounds shallow, I'm sorry..."

Hypnotica blushed back "I uh... wha?" she nearly brought her head up, but stopped and brought it back down.  "No no, it's not shallow. Most ponies make fun of my appearance, if you're shallow then I'm narcissistic for being very flattered by your comment..."

"W-w-well that's their loss I guess." Suntail said shyly. "I-i-if you don't mind my asking, why are you keeping your head down? D-d-did I do something wrong?"

"Oh no, please don't feel bad about me not looking, you see my eyes have this sort of... effect, on ponies. It makes them drowsy and puts them into a hypnotized like state. I don't like when that happens but I can't help it, the only ponies that don't seem to be effected are my family..." she prodded at the floor with her clawed hoof.

Suntail thought for a moment, then said "H-hey, I have an idea!", feeling a little less shy he reached for Hypnotica's chin and tried to lift her head up but as he did she closed her eyes.

"Please don't..." she said softly. "I don't want you to get drowsy, you're the first pony I've talked to in awhile that wasn't family or a Guard..."

"But I have an idea, please let me try, I won't get drowsy, I promise Princess."

Hypnotica sighed and opened her eyes, revealing the hypnotic cycles located under here eyelids. Suntail smiled as he looked at her "Your eyes are the most interesting part about you." She blushed at the comment.

"But... how?" she asked.

Suntail giggled. "I'm looking at the space right between your eyes, that way I can still see your eyes in my peripheral vision but I'm not looking right into them to be effected!"

Hypnotica blinked, astonished that she had never thought of that before. "And you don't feel funny?"

"Not at all!" he giggled again, and the two laughed together for the longest time.

After their laughing fit was over, Hypnotica dismissed the Guard and offered to show Suntail around herself. They had a great day between the sight seeing, the snacks, and the great deal of flying they did together, they were both pleased. Suntail ended up staying in the Kindom for a very long time, each day him and Hypnotica would hang out and do fun things together. Suntail grew fonder and fonder of her each day, she was so fun to be around when she wasn't feeling down, and when she did feel down he'd do his best to cheer her up. There were a few times when he heard ponies talk about her behind her back when they were out on the town but he handled them properly, questioning them why they feel the need to point out others flaws, was it because they weren't happy with themselves? That's what he believed.

When Suntail was finally able to work up enough courage, he looked her between the eyes, took her claw, and asked she would be his special somepony. A moment passed as she thought of the words he just said, but tears formed in her eyes and she pulled her claw away.

"I.... I'm sorry Suntail... I can't..." she turned away from him.

"Bu-but why Hypnotica? I-I-I love you... so much... and I just thought you might've felt the same way..." Suntail said sadly.

She wiped a tear from her eyes. "I-I-I love you too Suntail, more than I could ever express." she said between whimpers. "And that feeling has grown ever larger from the moment we met until now."

"T-t-then why?"

"... Because I don't want you to face the same torment I have for the longest time. I once hated myself so very much because of how I looked, many ponies never even took the time of day to get to know me. I'm a freak to them. The only thing that kept me going was my family, and the new talent I found helping ponies fall to sleep. And then you came along..... You're my everything Suntail, but if they were to find out we were together I'm sure the mocking would increase. I can take it easily, I'm use to it by now, but you... I don't want you getting hurt, you don't deserve it. You're so sweet and kind..." she said, wiping yet another tear.

Suntail trotted up and embraced her, a small tear in his eye as well. "I don't care what they'll say. You've shown me that's it's okay to be myself, okay for anypony to be who they are no matter how strange they may look, it's how a pony acts that matters. This is who I am, I am a pony who loves you deeply, a pony who doesn't care if some ignorant foals want to make fun of me for loving you, because their silly words can't make me love you any less."

Hypnotica burst into tears at this point, never had anypony she had ever known cared so much. She returned the embrace and between sniffles whispered "I will love you until the end of time, my special somepony..."

Eventually Suntail needed to get back to his job in Equestria but visits Hypnotica every single chance he can. Since he is a fast flier, he is usually able to make it to Queen Mary's Kingdom in a short amount of time and is able to do so if he gets all of his Weather Patrol duties done in a timely manor. Hypnotica hopes to one day be permitted to leave the Kingdom and live with him in Equestria, her mother is fond of Suntail but is still protective of her daughter and wishes that she not go to Equestria. Hypnotica understands though and doesn't want to go against her mothers wishes, ponies in Equestria are much different than in her Kingdom and she knows that she just wants her to be safe.
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brains-a-la-mode's avatar
yo i'm not super into ponies anymore but i still love this majestic creature
have you ever drawn an anthro Hypnotica?