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OC: Sour Candy the Longzhu

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The sister of Sweet Sugar, here is Sour Candy. :3 While I haven't drawn it yet, her pony disguise is a black unicorn, with the cutie mark of two sour gumdrops.

Parents: :iconserhalu: Serhalu's King Candy the Changeling serhalu.deviantart.com/art/Kin… and My Dusk Symphony the Longma silverromance.deviantart.com/a…
From Litter: serhalu-breedables.deviantart.… (Done by Serhalu on her Adoptable account, Serhalu-Breedables.)

Special Somepony: :iconfrozen-dead-soul: Frozen-Dead-Soul's Tricker Treat the Candy Harpy Pony xxsinfuladoptsxx.deviantart.co… (#4)

Sour is from the same hive as Sweet, and both of them are children of King Candy. One of her Longma traits is actually in the form of her Changeling like teeth, as it is a possible shared trait. When it is on a 2nd gen Longma with 3 other traits, it is considered the Longma trait, when it is on a 2nd gen Longma with 4 traits, it is classed as a Changeling trait. Like Sweet and the others she feeds on sweets and candy, however she doesn't like it much. She craves something more, and upon hearing of the exploits of the Chrysalis Changelings, her diabolical nature kicked in, she wishes to feed on some kind of pony emotion such as they did, happiness, the sweetest of emotions. During times when shes alone, she will turn into her pony self and trot off to see her pony 'friends', they are all nice and kind ponies, however with each visit she drains a little bit of their happiness, and they get more and more unkind as time goes on. She has a small group of followers that work in secret. If the King were to find out they would be exiled for mutiny, she had already inquired the King about her idea to feed on emotion but he turned it away, for he favors candy. Her sister knows not of her plans, but has an inkling that something is amiss with her. She hopes to one day convince the King to switch to her way of thinking, for she knows of his dark side.

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Tricker Treat and Sour met one day by chance. Sour was on her way to town from the hive in her pony disguise when Tricker lunged at her from a bush, hoping to get a nice meal. The surprised Sour quickly turned back to normal in order to defend herself, lifting up her from legs to push back the enemy with her strong claws. Tricker leaped back in surprise, he had not expected that he was dealing with a Changeling, but this one looked much different than others he had dealt with.

"Well hey there girlie, what's your deal?" he said with a smirk.

"I could ask you the same thing." Sour huffed, still catching her breath from the surprise.

"Well I'm a Candy Harpy of course." Tricker laughed. "And I'm guessing you're some kind of Changeling then?"

"A Longzhu." Sour replied, rather annoyed. "A Changeling Dragon Pony in layponies terms, since you don't seem like the educated type."

"Oh you have a little spice to you don't you? Like that." he said, snickering. "So what's your name toots?"

"If you must know, it's Sour Candy." she replied.

"Ohhh, Candy eh?" Tricker said, a plot hatching in his mind. "You must be one of them candy eating Changelings then are you?"

"Yes, I am. Not that I like the stuff." she said, scowling.

"Is that so? Perhaps you'd like a little taste of some Candy Harpy candy then? Guaranteed to please even the most picky palettes." he said, grabbing a piece of candy from his mane with a claw and passing it to Sour.

"Ick, I doubt that." she said, putting the candy in her mouth out of curiosity. To her surprise, it was actually quite good. Not only that, but she began feel slightly the same way as she did when she was draining happiness from ponies. "Hm, well I guess I was wrong then, this is actually amazing."

"Go ahead, have some more." he said, picking more pieces of candy out of his mane. Sour happily ate the candy, all the while feeling more and more rejuvenated with each bite.

"Hmhmhm... HAHAHAHA!" Tricker laughed, after she had eaten a large share of candy. "I bet you're feeling rather sick right now aren't you? Dizzy perhaps? Tired? Apathetic?"

"Uhh.. no. Quite the opposite actually." Sour replied, a quizzical look on her face.

Tricker's jaw dropped. "I... what? Am I losing my touch?" he said, scratching his head.

"I get the feeling there is something you're not telling me, other than your name that is." Sour Candy said, tilting her head in confusion.

"Well I'm Tricker Treat..." he pauses and then begins to snicker. "I guess since you seem to have bested me I'll tell you, or rather, show you..." Tricker grabbed Sour's leg and pulled her over behind the bush he had been hiding in. After a few moments it was apparent that a pony was coming in their direction on the path. "Watch this." Tricker said, stepping out of the bush as the pony neared.

"Heya there old buddy old pal how about some candy?" Tricker said, stuffing a piece of candy into the ponies mouth before he even knew what was going on. The pony was startled at first, but then calmed down rather fast, his eyes greyening a shade. His once happy demeanor changed, he frowned and almost looked a little green in his face like he was sick. However, a few moments later he started trying to grab at Tricker's mane to get more candy. "Oh no there pal, no more for you, you were just an example!" he said, swiping his claw at him and knocking him out cold. The perceptive Sour watched this unfold, with a slight sense a fear but an even bigger sense of intrigue.  A devious plan was unfolding in her mind as she jumped out of the bushes.

"So your candy changes ponies, like a drug if I'm not mistaken?" she said, looking him over.

"Yup. Aren't you the little smartypants?" he chuckled.

"Yes and I'm damn proud of it too. But that's not the point my new Harpy friend. You see, I am an heiress to the Candy Changeling hive, the hive in intend to rule over, the hive I intend to bring back to the Changeling ways. It is pathetic, they eat only candy and nothing more. But I've rallied a few of my like minded hivemates to my cause, if my Father the King refuses to allow us to act as the Changelings we are then he is no true King. But you Tricker... you can help me."

"You had my curiosity but now you have my attention." Tricker said, plopping his plot down to listen.

"That candy of yours, it didn't effect me because we are so like minded. If anything it made me stronger, it gave me the feeling of feeding on emotions. We both have darkness in our thoughts and are proud of it." she said. "Am I correct in assuming that?"

"That sounds about right." he replied.

"My hive is known to be goody goodies, they'll take in other kinds of ponies who are in need." she smirked. "Being a candy being yourself, they'd take you in in a heartbeat. Not only would you be able to supply me with some candy to save face with my Father when we eat together, candy that I can actually stomach, but there is another very crucial thing we could do with it..."

Tricker nodded, he could see where this was going.

"Your candy is like a drug, a poison. If we gradually slip it into the hive's candy supply, we could slowly brainwash my hivemates. They'll become apathetic, sickly, the hive will crumble and my Father will fall from power. It will be ripe for the taking by me and allies, to get more of that candy they would do anything they were told. And you, you would rule the hive beside me-" she stopped, realizing what she had just said. "W-W-Well what I mean was..."

Tricker smirked, walking over to her, so close she could feel his warm breath on her muzzle. "I would be happy to rule with you. The power of a Changeling army is astounding, combine that with some of my like minded friends..."

"And mine. I recently befriended an interesting bat pony, one who has went against the pact that they had made with the ponies, she has agreed to help me as well. I'm sure there are more like her out there as well..."

"Harpies, Changelings, Bat Ponies... with our forces combined it's not just your hive that we could take over... maybe..."

"Maybe all of Equestria could be ours to rule. An endless number of pony slaves for us to feed on." Sour trembled with excitement at the thought, not noticing how close she was getting to Tricker.

"It would be amazing..." Tricker grinned a dark grin, as he leaned closer to Sour, their lips meeting in a passionate kiss.
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