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So, I originally created this beauty as a gift to someone. They had asked if I would be able to make a Longzhu for them, I don't usually take requests but they had created an image for me and I figured I would return the favor. I made this for them, sent them a note with her in it to make sure she was what they wanted, but I never received a reply, and it's been a month and I know they saw the note because it is no longer bold in my Sent Notes. I even commented on their profile after the first week asking if they got the note, to which they replied they would check their notes, which they evidently never did. They were on again a week after that but still not reply, and now they haven't been on for two weeks. A month is a fairly long time to wait for a reply to something like this, I don't want this lovely mare to go to waste because I LOVE how she turned out, this may be one of my favorite images! I contemplated auctioning her off but, I just can't, I love her too much. I shall be keeping her!

This actually makes me want to make a whole series of Changeling/Longzhu based around the 7 Deadly Sins, I think I'll do that eventually. X3 I watched Fullmetal Alchemist again recently and it gave me a few ideas, hehe.

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Venom Lust is a rouge Longzhu, she left the hive of her Mother when she reached adult hood and never knew her Father. Early on in life she knew she didn't belong to the small hive of Changelings who fed upon Love, when she fed on it she felt nothing, it did not satisfy her cravings. She was the only Longzhu in the hive at the time, and was often looked down upon by the others. She cared not for their stares, while these Changelings thought she was inferior to them, she believed otherwise, answering their stares by holding her head up like she was the cock of the walk.

On the day she left, she wished to get back at the hive. She snuck into the King's throne room, and sunk her teeth into him. For a split second she felt a strangeness flowing through her two large Longma horns, but hadn't the time to worry about it and fled as fast as she could to the door. Before she could leave however, he called to her, in a sensual voice instead of his usually booming tone. She turned to see the King had a dopey smile on his face, "Come to me, my Longzhu subject. Your King wishes to have a... word with you." this perplexed Venom, she turned and trotted right up to the King, who continued to stare at her warmly. "You have been given a hard time since you first arrived here, allow me to make up for that... my future Queen." he said, as he lifted his long leg and put it around her, forcing her very close to him. Venom sneered, "You pick now to care for me my King, what gives?" The King squeezed tighter, "Your beauty outmatches any of that I have ever seen.' his hoof began to move lower down her body, "I wish for you to bare my children, and become my Queen."

Venom sneered once again, removing herself from his grasp. He continued to stare at her, giving her a strange but satisfying feeling. "Is this..." she wondered to herself, but his stare began to anger her and she lunged at him, once again sinking her teeth into his skin and feeling the same sensation in her horns, then flying up above him. This bite seemed to make his strange mood even more prominent, "Come to me my Venom, let me kiss you and nuzzle you through the night~" Venom thought for a moment, and then came to a realization. "So... this is my power then." she laughed. "I wonder what would happen if..." she flew at the King one final time, this time biting him multiple times as hard as she could. He nearly grabbed her again, but she once again flew up out of his reach. This time however instead of saying something sappy, he began to weeze, the color drained from his face and he clenched his chest. "But...my...Queen..." he said, as he collapsed to the floor. Venom waited a few moments, then swooped down to where he had fallen.

No pulse.

"Excellent." she said proudly, satisfaction washing over her. "It was only a matter of time before I found my power, and now that I have, I know exactly how to use it." She finally flew out of the throne room, and snuck to the exit of the hive, making sure not to be seen, then flew off into the world, planning her next move. She studied the ponies and their ways from afar, and taught herself how to change into her disguised form, a beautiful black Pegasus. This pleased her, as she would be able to go anywhere to feed, be it on land or up in Cloudsdale. Her cutie mark in this form was a purple heart with venom seeping from it, and formulated a story for its existence as to not arouse suspicion. She would tell ponies who asked that it was a nurse who took care of ponies with heart conditions. She giggled as she thought it up, "I'm not wrong am I?" she said to herself, eagerly excited to set her plans in motion.

After having studied the ponies habits, mostly those centering around love and courtship, she found her first test subject. He was a strange Earth pony, one who wasn't too good with the mares and very timid, an easy first target. She disguised herself and began her test, "My, what a handsome stallion you are." she said to him, and he took the bait. "How about we go out for dinner?" she asked him, and he nervously accepted. When dinner was over and the night was young, Venom made her move. "I had such a lovely time, you are such a gentlecolt." she nuzzled her face into the fur on his neck, and gave him a soft bite, sending some of her licentious venom into his blood stream. "I shall be on my way home now..." she said, as she began to turn and leave. "No, please, come stay the night with me!" the timid Stallion began to insist. It was working, he was fawning over her. She decided to reward the stallion that night, and went back with him to his home. She fed on his lust for her the entire night, and left the moment he was asleep. She flew to a small cluster of trees on the edge of the town, where she changed back to her Longzhu self and pondered her findings. She knew her venom worked on ponies and not just Changelings, and she knew for sure that she was able to feed on the lust produced from it with ease. She also found she quite enjoyed the... 'activities' that ensued because of her lust inducing venom.

The next day, she went out with the timid stallion once again, and slipped another small bite onto him playfully. Just like the King, he became more affectionate, and more lustful. She was able to feed even more than the night before, and even more still the next day when she nipped him once again. He bought her everything she asked him, jewelry, flowers, just because she knew he would do it. This went on for awhile until the venom finally did him in, a final nip from Venom's teeth while they laid in bed together after a wonderful night, Venom had fed on more of his lust that night than she ever had. The final nip caused his heart to stop, and fully satisfied, Venom left the home and the town all together, her test results being much better than she anticipated.

She was sustained for a long while after that, living in a small hive she built just for herself, but eventually her hunger returned, and she found her next victim. She did to him as she did to the first but this time, only until she could sense that he could take no more venom, and then vanished, returning to her hive. She then watched from afar as the stallion missed her, yearned for her, yelled in the streets that he needed her, and this gave her another, different tasting lust to feed upon for a time. The venom eventually left his system and he forgot about her. She was sustained for a short time after that, much shorter than before, but this was because she didn't finish this stallion off. The final bite may provide the absolute best results, but she knew she should try her best not to kill her victims, it'll leave more food for her in the end. Eventually she needed to have more than one stallion to feed on at a time, what seemed like karma in action, she lusted for more lust. This didn't bother her much however, the feeling it gave her was incredible, and the power she had over the stallions (which began turning into mares too after awhile, she liked variety) was too good to pass up. Venom tries her absolute best to note kill her victims, but there has been a few other occasions where she misjudged how much of her love poison a pony could take. She doesn't care too much though, she feels ponies are beneath her and their existence is only to serve her and her desires, if one or two dies it's no big loss, and she gets a huge lust bonus because of it. A few ponies have started rumors about a promiscuous mare who kills her lovers, given the nickname 'Black Widow'. Venom loves when she hears ponies telling the story, because she knows even if they are as cautious as they can be when finding a 'special somepony', if she wants to sink her teeth into them, there is no stopping her.
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S-aiitoChan's avatar
This actually makes me want to make a whole series of Changeling/Longzhu based around the 7 Deadly Sins,...

And then there's me, waiting to know the rest... :3